The Verdict
The thesis proposal went over pretty well last Friday.  Even though I was quite nervous, I am pleased to report that taking a public speaking class this semester has definitely paid off.
The verdict is a green light conditional on a few minor modifications:
- An indication at the end of the Abstract that this is an Industry-oriented thesis (as opposed to the more traditional Research-oriented thesis).
- In the introduction to the Related Work section, I wrote that the “following subsections will consider what others have done to make this happen and why it is not sufficient.” The committee would like me to be clearer on why the solutions I mention are not sufficient.
- A paragraph or two in the Validation section on how I will push adoption of my solution. For example, I will be giving a presentation at the Family History Technology Workshop in March.
For anyone who’s interested, I’ve posted the
 slides used in my presentation. There isn’t much to them that wasn’t in the proposal paper, though I do like the organization a little better.
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Don’t be so modest—the proposal went more than “pretty well”–it was excellent! You did a wonderful job at explaining the DFT and gave your audience a tantalizing taste of what it is capable of. To everyone who was not there- I recommend looking at the slides.
One thing you did forget to mention in this post though is the comment on the nucleartoiletpaper in the URL by one of the committee members.
Heheheh… you mean the part where Dr. Martinez read the last slide, exclaimed, “Nuclear toilet paper!?,” and ‘recommended’ that I move this blog elsewhere? :)
I’ll admit the name is unfortunate. Blame it on the excesses of youth. As soon as I can find a decent available domain name I’ll move the blog and forward the old links.